Changes to script

We have changed our script, we now start with Aleisha saying goodbye to Abbie, this means we also cut out the first phone call. We also now finish with the line "where are you, I don't believe you" and then there's a slam at the kitchen window, with Toby holding Abbies face against the window, covered in blood.

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Script for Horror Film

(POV shot of kitchen into lounge)
Aleisha - here you go
Abbie - cheers
(phone rings / CLOSE UP)
Aleisha - hello?
(MID)
Phone - you look pretty tonight ...
Aleisha - why thankyou
(Abbie and aleisha both laugh)
- SILENCE - (POV)
Aleisha - who is this?
(MID)
(phone goes dead)
Aleisha (to Abbie) - well, that was odd
(both laugh)
Abbie - right, I better go, cheers for the cuppa
Aleisha - alright, see ya later (sees Abbie out / CLOSE UP) Bye! (LONG)
Abbie - bye
(phone rings / CLOSE UP)
(POV from garden into house)
Phone - thank god she left
Aleisha - what? Who is this?
Phone - you'll see
Aleisha - what's that supposed to mean?
Phone - your hair looks nice straight
Aleisha - who is this? Where are you?
Phone - I can't tell you that ...
(man walks past back window, I turn but he's already gone)